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Old 09-17-04, 02:12 AM   #16
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

IP:

weak battle

punches- solja
personals- solja
multis- eve
metas- eve
word play- eve
flow- solja

Solja ok verse. work on your vocab and harder punches. work on the structure cuz lotta people judge on that.

Eve way to elementary. punchers were weak, u had multis, and better metas but thats it. one word: elevate

Solja:
"Yo your styles like a mold and im the disinfectant,
i saw that battle between you and young buck you got neglected," good personal.

Eve:
"solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play//" good idea, bad wordin.

v/solja if i could vote