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Old 09-17-04, 06:53 AM   #32
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Voted For: Wicked One

aight string decent flow some ok punches but your complexity lacked,n your punches were kinda simple closer was funny but nothin overly personal in this verse of yours,structure was weak,vocab could be improved also,but an ok drop....
wicked one,1 of your better drops,lacked real personals but your punches n vocab were more complex n flow was on point for the most part...hip hop police,funny line punches were slightly better seemed more thought out n some connected...
overall wicked gets my vote 4 more consistent connecting punches..decent battle.....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!