Voted For: -EXPLICIT-
Yo.. you rap wack.. I saw your last battle… you lack rap //
When this kid spits. all ya hear is an Echo.not even a clap// *
^^nice opener
Fuck rap… Ill “terrorize” this emcee fuck it ill just hush yah //
Leavin yo body drippin blood like that school in “Russia” // &
^^decent
Merk this Californian so bad you’ll be callin me the terminator //=
You have about as much chance as the US electin Ralph Nader //
^^was'nt feelin this much
You beating me is like attempts at “showing” me “smell” //
Fake thug as well.. "stepping on snails" is the only time ya "bust a shell" //
^^liked this,showing smell<nice
Here from the start.. yet the only way to win is if he battles a ghost.. //$
Fuck it.. Your done.. You winnin is like pac reppin the east coast //+
^^good closer
whos explicit? wit 3 wins and a thousand sum posts*
thinkin he's the shit when im like the holy ghost
^^1st line good setup,but 2nd was boarderline self glorification
only free posts or did he just restart his re_cord**
cuz like empire your bitch ass is gonna be ignored
^^wasnt feelin this...
so u can drop the parental advisery playboy
cuz i never knew ur shit was explicit u brave boy
^^weres the punch?
makin lies witchua name..thinkin u gon gain fame
put a bullet to ya frame,put shame to ya fams name
^^weak
cuz u got murdered by ecko..thats why im already proclaimin' this
or was your bitch ass to scared you jus happened to slice ya wrist
^^weak closer....
aight this battle was 1 sided,explicit had nice structure good flow n consistent well setout punches some hit some missed ,ecko,your whole verse was lackin punches,some good ideas but you werent capitalizing on them,try n refrain from saying -im-in comparison my flow n shit like that it comes off as self glorification....give my vote to explicit 4 better punches with some nice wordplay...
return the favour...
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