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Old 09-17-04, 07:39 AM   #15
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Voted For: Tha Flash

aight 2 many lines...lol...ok this was a 1 sided battle flash had a couple structured punches n decent flow the other verse im srry it was pretty much not good at all,work on your structure lenghten your lines n get more complex n witty with ya punches...overall i gotta go with the flash for havin decent punches...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!