I thought this was good, i mean maybe if you upped ya vocab and worded afew things differently,...

but this was still a descent read, and who cares about what people think

IM TOLD IM WACK AND YA KNOW WHAT,,,,,,,, EVERY ONE WHO SAID THAT IS WORSE THAN ME AND IS PLAIN OLE JEALOUS






All these children dying off abortion, What ever happend to the love and supportin'
Riped and tore them, all because the babies mom was whorin'
That line sucked

I know a girl who got raped and pregnant at the same time,,, and she had an abortion cause why keep a kid that you only got cause you were raped...... I know this because she is a LESBIAN...........

Also my cousin got raped by her stepfather when she was 14,,,,,, DO you really think she woudl keep the KID..... I think not-------- other than that i thought this peace was pretty good,.....


Bombings and murder's shed blood off all races, Every nation'
Look at these suicide bomber people, taking there own lives, cuz its others lives they have taken'

I liked the creativity in that and it was pretty much on point.....

Overall i give this a 8-10

Peace

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