Geaux Fuck Yourself
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Voted For: Spiderman
woah... Lyrical... your style sucks...
Imma break this down simple...
Flow... spidey
Structure... spidey (you need to work on it tho)
Vocab... spidey (I liked it... I thought it was kinda tight)
Wordplay... spidey
Metas... tie
opening...lyrical
closer... spidey (wasn't that good tho)
personals... spidey
VOTE: Spiderman
Lyrical: up your vocab... work on punches
spidey: keep writing... you gettin' better.
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2003-2009
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Originally Posted by SPuL
^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.
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