Thread: talen vs, kelo
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Old 09-17-04, 01:59 PM   #11
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
IP:

Quote:
Originally Posted by kelo
I"M OUT SAY WAT THA FUCK U LIKE CAUSE THEY ALL KNOW WHO WIN THIS 1
ya not u.

punches- TT
personals- TT
multis-TT
metas- TT
word play- TT
flow- TT

TT ok verse. some weak punches, good word play. keep elevatin.

Kelo work on your structure so people can read your verse, weak punches, no personals, just keep elevatin.

TT:
"Kelo of crack? Even fiends smoke you to get thrashed.
And if you want to be wasted,I'll be happy to throw you in the trash" nice wordplay and punch.

Kelo:
"so think twice before u steep 2 me cause u will get pimp slap harder than a ho and have u fuck fa free" so r u sayin u wanna do him?

v/ TT