Voted For: final

Boy Wonder:
Overall - 2/10

-Vocab was elementary
-didnt need the ... after every line
-Only multie was weak (hocus pocus)
-Basically whole verse was talking about what your gunna do to him, those arent punches, they are threats that will never happen...

Final:
Overall - 5/10

-Good vocab
-Solid structuring
-metas/multies are needed
-Personals are definatly needed cause you could basically use that verse on anyone on the site

As you can see from what I have just said above ^^^ Final is the winner here today. No hate, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace....