yea, i have to agree, i don't think you put anything into this, be careful with what you say as well in here, because, this is a nice forum, well i try, and i understand you have opinions too, but even if you didnt mean it, your flow was off a bit and some words didnt rhyme, too many curses, and not reall structure, try to improve with these things, and you will benefit nicely, so for now, please keep your verses clean

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