*'s mean an explination is due
[FONT=Palatino Linotype].::the only good lines I "spot" is the "spot" in your empty spaces ::.
.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::.
.::your lines have no bounderies like the hatians demonstratins::.
.::you're a
MALEFICtion character with "fake" lines as a inspiration::.
.::how you have a black name but freinds with a racist?...you're spacious::.
.::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::.
.::swallow the loss and spit, and it doesn't change Hue::.
.::maybe it's becaused you and losses have had previous disputes::.(battles)
.::all your rhymes predictable like the pictures appearing on a movie reel::.[/FONT
(your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
draw=cards--bridge=a card game)
(.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::.
malefic was a haitian man on MASH which was on a base)
(.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::.
his sig is scrambled and confusing-you'll see after the battle
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that's all me
vote on this me or FIC'll return the favor