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Old 09-17-04, 07:54 PM   #6
Abraxas
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Voted For: Malefic

very great verse both of you and both had nice drops overall

Proverse: ya lnies were good nice line good drop overall but ya lines were a lil too stretched and out you got the multis thoguh but it really didnt help ya punches were iight it was ok and ya personals were good but you really didnt have to put explaining that much cos it ruined a rappers real skill and shit umm you had ok strucutre thoguh ya lnie flowed well... nice drop

Malefic: ya verse was good nice drop nice verse overall ya had the punches it was really good and some were funny and really original ya had some ok personals but ya structre was good overall and your lines and verse flowed well... both were good

Vote Malefic becuasse he had stronger punches

proverse could have won if he had more stronger punches and if he had less explaining
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