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Originally Posted by ~{ExClusive}~
heres a verse and tell me what you think of it its from my battle verse Nutz-B in my sig but heres a little verse 
I’ll Re-write yer life with my punches and you’ll be the first to act-up…
After then you’ll need to go to the doctors office to get yer close-up/
Its yer first time to lose to me, cuz im a straight up hardcore emcee…
Out rule you fast ill get another “K.O” cuz yer verse sucks, well I disagree/
Ill turn yer life around from this point on you’ll be known as a handicap…
You will be walkin around like that cuz my verse was like a pimp-slap/
I hit bitches and stunt muthafuckas like you around the place…
Even everyone in “RV” says that yer bitch-ass is a disgrace/ |
I’ll Re-write yer life with my punches and you’ll be the first to act-up…
After then you’ll need to go to the doctors office to get yer close-up/
No punch..thats really just a statement...
Its yer first time to lose to me, cuz im a straight up hardcore emcee…
Out rule you fast ill get another “K.O” cuz yer verse sucks, well I disagree/
Saying you disagree is stating that his verse is good and your gonna lose...word you shit better...
Ill turn yer life around from this point on you’ll be known as a handicap…
You will be walkin around like that cuz my verse was like a pimp-slap/
Come on man...just gay punches...
I hit bitches and stunt muthafuckas like you around the place…
Even everyone in “RV” says that yer bitch-ass is a disgrace/
Your trying to form a punch but ur just stating your concept...get creative!
Now what you need to do is say what u wanna say to him in a creative way...so u wanna say they are gay...well heres sumtin u could say...
You ride all over my dick.. well now ive straight up had it...
Cause this fag has hit more balls.. then a tennis racket...
While sumtin you would spit is...
Everyone claimin you suck.. your lame and hey...
This whole site pretty much thinks your gay...
You see what I'm getting at?...you gotta let your mind think of creative metas to make that concept hit hard...or else its pointless to even try to form a decent concept...