RB's Grandpa.!
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Look at me now, ma, you'd be so proud of me, wouldn't you?/
"Your brother always did things right, why couldn't you?"/
^^*i for real felt that line, nice flow in it too* deepness
To live and die, a failure..cuz dat's all I'll ever be/
And now with this razor, I set my tortured soul free/
^^*to me, this sounds almost FUN, but im threw with them day* nice in its own way
*-i liked it, not as good as others i read from you but still kept my attention, i dunno how you write......whether its from real life cituations or stuff you think people might relate better to but either way, keep ya head up and keep these nice poems poppin'
"stay thinking"
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