Voted For: InsaneJoka666

Weak battle y'all

Breakdown for Insane:

you winnin is dim,like partially sighted people playin Football ya no contest..
i rip my opponents with ease, spittin xtreme,im on a one man conquest..

Set up was nice but punch killed it 5/10

i got this pussy beggin for mercy on his knees...While im Smoking them Tree's...
who's this whack emcee easin tha words like a verbal laxative...
in this battle you'll get 'smoked' in the open like cops to herbal activists

3 line punch not great idea but it was creative 6/10

with my 'fuses' lit i aim to 'blow up' an spit sick...
even "chewin up a dictionary" this bitch couldnt flow like this an spit well worded scripts ...

Blah weak 4/10

i melt this virgins grip in this..like unwanted mail ya quickly ripped-up....
hit you hard in tha face so many times, you'll get ya mouth stitched up"...

Very weak not even apunch 3/10

by the time you read this his time has paste...cuz im rippin thi bitch Sick and Fast...

One line closer weak 3/10
Overall: 21/50


Breakdown for platinum......

Bust your shyt b-fo u pull back, B-fo u accept ima give u a bytch Slap/
Take your shyt in tha gay barz fucka,You Workin da cornerz fo me Sucka/

Weak not even a punch 2/10

Ahh fuck wat u sayin,Ima grad ma shyt to ya face n start sprayin/
You cant stand to me nigga cause u get killed,Nigga ya boyz callin out n they know u dead now they Thrilled/

What kinda structure is that? no punch 1/10

So you down wit one of tha best Crewz,Bytch get down n start cleanin ma Shoes/
Comin first ima give u a pennie fo a pay of da Week,Ima add some shyt to ma winnin Streak/

What? again not even a punch a lil wordplay 3/10

You startin to get cocky datz why u left Dead,Your bytch cryin fo u but im get her in ma Bed/
Just to get her more into been Happy,Now dat she happy she thinkin your dick iz juz Crappy/

U can't be serious...1/10

Take your sorry down in tha 6-6-6,Ima start playin around wiot ya into ma own trix/
Dont eva disrespect me nigga,Next time ima do somethin to ya fam wit ma trigga/

Ok dat was wack, an again no punch..courtesy number 2/10

Overall: 9/50

Both was weak but plat u really gotta elevate man, read a tutorial on punchlines an personals cuz I ono what u dropped.

Vote: Insane

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