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Old 09-18-04, 02:32 PM   #7
Mc:Xplicit
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Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

weak battle
venom: way to long and a few lines didnt rhyme(number 12)
but it was way better that the otha dudes. work on your structure and you can be more effective. also work on some of your punches

logikal: dawg this is not elemntary school and so come with harder rhymes dog get some punches personals or something u need to work on that the next time aight

drop honest votes here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857