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Old 09-18-04, 07:59 PM   #8
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Voted For: Red Bull

aiiight

redbull got this, even tho his verse was shoter, it was much more to the point, better punches an structure...
maybe could elevate ya vocab redbull, u definately got away with punches n metas, nice drop...

physocist, ya flow was okay, you'd get alot more propps if you improved structre...

tooke me twice to read ya verse n find the rhymes, but when i did they was aight, just improve ya structre n punches, metas an so on will imrove as time goes on (no hate)

return the fave in my sig ya'll

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