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Old 09-18-04, 08:24 PM   #22
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Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

Aight

shun got this...
both verse came kinda basic, not much creativity from either emcee, but shuns personals n metas connected n hit alot harder than ya oppenent..

upfront, ya rhyme scheme was too basic, ya need'a elevate n try usin punchlines, punches wins battles n i didnt see one punch in ya flow, no offence just try experimenting with humour n punches...

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