Voted For: lyriclord

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whats your name its hard to read/
my ryhmes are like toxic making it hard for you to breathe/

hard to read ? you blind ? and self glorification wont get ya anywhere.

you little noobie bitch dont know/
im hear to fry your ass and reap your soul/

know what ? again self glorification

ho's no you dont get any/
cause your rhymes are just like your game,shity/

dont even rhyme

cause your pigeon done flown the coupe/
you only won your first battle by a fluke/

also dont rhyme

this battlle i will win/
cause for you this is the end/

again it dont rhyme, pretty wack to be honest. make lines longer and less self glorification.

lyriclord -

Got a crap text record, not botherin with audio, gonna make another scratch on ya record now,
End it now and get off the site, do away with rap, farewell now take a bow,

okay opener. nice long lines but you aint botherin with audio either.

Your only two wins were properly from dq’s or gainst newbs wacker then you, if there is one,
Every battle you go into, by every opponent you are just clearly outdone,

okay bar again, nice punch

Yo some one teach this herb how to rap, cus hes gonna lose every battle with lines that crap,
And every one will want to battle him, jus for an easy win, hey kid ya want a map?

again it was ok, again nice punch

So ya can find ya way onto the winnin track, in battles he can’t defend even a really weak attack,
Reading my verse your head will go smack, on the floor when ya read my rhymes, cus yours are so wack,

dissin him again. i can see that your elevatin.

I excepted and now im gonna finish this battle, between two newbs, one good and him,
Take your wack ass and your crappy rhymes and get down to a gym.

bit of self glorification at the end there, nice anyway. good verse nice flow and long lines, okay punches keep workin on it.

vote goes to lyriclord for better flow and punches.

no hat just an honest opinion.

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