flow was off from the beginning of this battle lyriclord, try and keep your lines more an equal length. your punches were ok, some decent, some less than average. rhyming structure was ok, it's just you were trying to use multi's when there really wasn't any need to, try and use multi's when it helps with a hard punch, not just to say you've had a multi in it. ending was weak and i didn't get it.

reloaded, try and elevate on everything, you weren't even rhyming the whole verse, you were rhyming a few lines, then not bothering with the others. very weak verse in my opinion, no hard hitting punches or personals. ending must have been the wackest thing i have ever seen. elevate. no hate, just feedback.