Voted For: intensify effect



Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs-
I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs
^^ok opener,played concept though...7/10
Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit....
And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's
^^7/10...good personal but worded wierd"uncoordinated"?
I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture..
Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster
^^ehh,ok..6/10..diss your opponent
So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0...
Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow
^^ok personal..6.5/10
Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected
End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik....
^^weak closer,but flowed well...6/10

overall 32.5/50....personal were ok but your originality n creativity with ya punches lacked some,flow was good though..



u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance
N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence
^^ok name play,played concept..7.5/10
i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision
u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS
^^was'nt feelin it much,6/10
im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol
fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle *ha * (its better if we hear noting)
^^good line,nice personal,8/10
carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out
cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout
^^ok...6/10
my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision
u wanna "blast-for-me? (blasphemy) not befor i Change u'r religion BITCH!!!
BANG-BANG-EARLY....
^^ok closer 6/10

overall 33.5/50,ok verse personals were decent,more originality with punches,flow was there,good word/nameplay.

aight this was close but from punches carson you jus lacked a lil,structure n flow were fine but nothin you used as a punch was'nt played,meta's on both verses were weak,ie,again some of your punches were based on played concepts,flow was there n all,your closer had decnt wordplay but was a weak closer....overall i gave my vote to ie for slightly more creative n harder hitting punches....

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