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Old 09-19-04, 10:27 AM   #18
Reflect
The Next Level
 
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Voted For: Red Bull

Intensity Effect

my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*

didn't rhyme, not a hard hitting punch.

ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*

didn't really make sense. not feelin your punch.

my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"

decent punch. stretched though.

u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

not a bad closer, 1st line was strange though. 2nd good.

Red Bull

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that

nice multi's in there, good punch. didn't rhyme the 2 lines though.

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

also good multi's, decent punch.

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic

lol, good personal. hard hitting. again, good multi's.

overall, red bull took this one, he had harder hitting punches and a witty closer. intensity, i wasn't really feeling your verse, some of it didn't seem to make much sense. no hate, just honest opinion.

v/ red bull