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Originally Posted by ~{ExClusive}~
k heres a song with a punchline in it a punchline basically im gonna make one with eyr name its only simple to do it but it dont meen anything jsut for a example here it is:
this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
^^^thats weak but is it a punchline? i can do better
k heres some wordplay:
i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
^^^that wordplay? i kno its weak but w/e is it?
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this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
Telling them shut up doesnt deliver a punch...say sumtin witty..
i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
No...i dont see the wordplay...u attepmted a meta...a weak one...keep practicing and read the vets battles and try to imitate their syles...