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Old 09-19-04, 10:51 AM   #4
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Voted For: Red Bull

red bull - nice sturcture and flow through out, good punches aswell, good personal at the end aswell, liked that very much. i liked your whole verse good opener and closer.

intestify effect- aight your lines didnt even rhyme until the 6th lines which is wack. even if the lines did rhyme they would still be wack and didnt really hit hard. try and keep your line length more consistant, they were all over the place.

vote goes to red bull, for better punches and basiclly everything.

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