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Old 09-19-04, 02:32 PM   #42
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Originally Posted by Trooper

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
that first line sounds familar. but even if it sucks

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
damn thats lame kid no punch no pers. .comon
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
thtas really lame kid try harder
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
this whole verse wasnt worth the letters



p dizzle shit wasnt all that but it was better thatn this waste
more personals more punches more everything...that hate crime rhyme was hot
also was feeling ya personals p vote 4 p dizzle