i loved this peice... i know how this feels and u described that feeling wonderfully... the flow was amazin, the vocab was aweosme, and the emotions were deep, heartfelt and tru... fave lines:

How your love proclaims/
Of stars to line my sky/
But powerful it does maim/
As I watch my love fly/
Incaipable to flollow/
so my grasp must release/
my full heart now hollow/

i know thats about 1/2 the poem, but i loved it! hehe, keep it flowin