Voted For: untouchablekilla

TORJAN..

ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me...
i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee...
1ST LINE WAS GOOD 2ED FELL OFF n TO ME MADE NO SENSE..

ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...*
ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat...
SET UP DECENT FOLLOW WAS WEAK

am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look...
id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...**
CHRONIC DONT MAKE U SEE THINGS BETTER THAT ARE UGLY LIQUER DO... WASNT FEELING IT....

am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu...
ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...***
1st line was weak, follow was decent

untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped...
u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...****
weak N played concept but i've seen it worded way better...

u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round
am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown...
eeeeh....

dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide...
ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...*****
decent cuz i still grasp what u was trying to say N do...

ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars...
locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars...
nah ending was lacking a punches or diss or personal wasnt to raw in this battle word-play was iffy N weak at times
flow was ok creativeness just wasnt good....
5/10


killah

untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats
used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text
preety good opener...

trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly
The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me
decent....

my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes
hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys*
haha shit was funny to me decent diss....

my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/
your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence
ok..

its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma
punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma
good hit...

fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need
I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe
ending was weak....

but u still had decent hits decent diss flow was good creativeness was slightly above average all around not a bad verse...

7.5/10