yo both were real nice topical ish right on point,
i prefered peripherals flow, couldn't really get into yours sin... but i do like how sins ending to his kinda takes you back to the beginning and also makes you feel like you've stopped time for the verse
e.g
"So Please..take da next picture..So I could be wit ya ..faster...
click da button..let da moment be captured..."

saying that i like peripherals ending, it has a kinda sweet bitter ending which i like
"Now I get the best picture as I watch u lose control…
I told u that it wouldn’t hurt if I photographed ur soul.."

Metaphorically speaking both were on point

damn this is very close but ima have to go with peripheral as i kinda got into it more.... ya both did dope tho
no wait read both again and gonna go with damn fuck it your gonna have to get someone else to vote, too close for my likings.....good shit
peazz