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Old 09-19-04, 03:51 PM   #9
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Voted For: final

honestly this was hand hard to vote on but look...

flow: final
punches: none
creativeness: CFA
strucsure final

vote: final...

CFA u'r verse sound more like a open mic then a battle....
but u still had some good lines but i wouldnt follow them
brake ya lines up dont make them look like a praragraph cuz that def wont help u but u was more creative N that was about it....