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Old 09-19-04, 04:54 PM   #31
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

flow and structure-shottaboy,insane gotta work on it a lot,one line was short then the next line is long, try to have syllables matching in each line

punches/personals-shottaboy,threw more and they hit harder,insanes were ok and he gave an attempt at some metas but shottaboy overthrew it

vocab-shottboy, insane tried with the last 2 lines but most of shottaboys verse was filled with vocab

no hatin on insane both did good, honest vote good luck peace
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