Voted For: CarsonJetX2

i.e.- na. punches were poo and im tired of u tryin to convince people that the line was hot by typing *ha* and *lol* after ya shit...stop it! structure=off wordplay=nah metas=weak....keep elevatin.....3/10

carson- so youve merged back in to text huh? anywayz your punches were hard as fuck, i reallllly liked that one bout the tits....lmao! personals were on point everything was just good this time around...8/10

nobody get this shit takin off, this is plenty of feedback. i summarized and gave tips. rtf....

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