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Old 07-12-02, 03:07 PM   #2
MC4Eyez
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Not a bad drop. Good to see some nerds representing. I thought that the first verse was better overall. Solid vocab and good flow. The second verse was alright, and had some nice wordplay.

Quote of Note:
Pant Cuffs Over Ankles Waitin For a Flash Flood,
I liked that one.

The "slash every tire on the bike rack" line was used by Eminem in "Brain Damage" so you might want to change it 'cause people might accuse you of biting or something.

Nice work.

Peace
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