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Old 09-19-04, 09:30 PM   #17
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

ok, since we all in the same crew, i can vote in this,
i think fya~had the better verse here, because of the personals and his punches were original and his words were creative, some spelling and grammar errors but not bad, it was a prety good verse, i liked the line"cus ya verse was as blank as a white tee", and the closing lines were good too, i just think you came harder here,
white tee~your verse was good too, nice flow, i liked your closing lines,but the opener wasn't that strong, tho i understand the concept, and what you tried to do, was creative tho as well, good job both
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