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Old 09-19-04, 10:04 PM   #20
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

WT- nah. i didnt really like ya punches, and the wordplay and meta4's were simple as shit, seems like you got talent but it just aint comin out, kep elevatin.....5/10

FS- umm punches were on and off. on=fart and shit line.....off=lance bass line.(ugh!) but anyways you had a better overall verse. more complex, better metas and wordplay, that type of shit. but there is no doubt you can elevate on complexity.....7/10

RTF.....links in da sig.
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