<<-Carpe Noctum->>
|
IP:
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
ok, heres how i see it,
there was really no contest here,
carson~your production and overall quality of this track were very good, and your flow was on point, i had a hard time deciphering some words, because of the breathing, but all in all, this was some of the best rhyming i've heard from you, as well as delivery, nice job
cho~your lyrics were clear, and your flow was ok, but i think you need to work on delivery and the way you project your voice, feel the beat more,this will improve, and try to take those pops out too, you might want to, put a sock over the mic or a cover, this will take care of the problem
i vote carson because of overall style and flow here
__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"
O Y D
*FluidMusic*
*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*
|