Voted For: Quick Witted

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quick~your verse was good,but it was stretched, try to compact your words, by using less filler, you had good personals and hard punches here, i liked your last bar, it was good, and your opener was good as a starter, watch your rhymes too, cus some words dont rhyme, like the last letters, but overall nice job here, it was good enough to win
CFA~your verse wasnt that bad or that good either, you had no structure, try to work on that, and maybe throw in some personals and punches,you need those for battles,
vote:quick

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