damn man that was hot.. I was def.. feeling it... good concept... nice flow... well used vocab.. the one thing I would do is get rid of the I have 0 hours to live... and add something else like no more time to live... I think Id try and use more meta's but what you did worked well..

I really felt this bar...
"Got another tattoo and labeled it fear/
Because there’s none in my heart, but it always is near/"

keep flowin and elevatin... 1...

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