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Old 09-20-04, 12:27 AM   #16
50Cal.
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Voted For: Red Bull

ok lyrical that flow was ok a little but ok verse was good wordplay and vocab punches were weak though and disses aint really hit and that pink shit been used to death already and you aint word it good a ok verse but you need to elevate and drop better punches and whats big briother?who is francis?anyways a 4/10
red ok opener personal that was a gansta cardpull but it couldve been worded better good second bar punch that was good the ejacaluation bar was ok good flow and wordplay on the ender flow was consitent here as well as vocab punches were not great but better then lyricals by far and disses were ok as well a ok overall verse but punches that were better and a nicer to follow flow won you this a 6/10
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