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Old 09-20-04, 08:28 AM   #13
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for HOLLOW_TIPS

IP:

i cant vote cuz im in his crew

punches- hollow
personals- hollow
multis- neither
metas- hollow
word play- hollow
flow- hollow

Hollow nice verse man. u won it wit the punches. get in some more personals is all i can think of.

BB u need to elevate, weak punches, and no personals. Also use wut u got, dont go minimum. No wordplay and make your rhymes make sense, dont make up or just throw in words that rhyme.

Hollow:
"dont speak nigga please dont TALK/before im done with this rhyme ill have you laying in CHALK/so you wanna be MC_BAD_BOY/how you gone be a BAD BOY?/whne my gurl saw your prayin in CHURCH/" only personal i found but a good one.

BB:
"ur wack rhymes cudnt beat a flea hollow dont u mean wacky//
u will never get me out u nightmares coz i am da best nacky//" wtf is a nacky?

v/hollow if i could vote