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Old 09-20-04, 10:48 AM   #54
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Aaight battle.....Creative-I wasnt feelin your verse....nore you style....wack personals use personals that people can do research on like his sig or sum shit not about how "fat" he is....Opener was good...closer was alright......No metas. make your lines shorter so it will be easier to read cause thats some bad structure.........Shotta-Opener was really good....closer was aight....no personals.....very good vocab........nice structure....and better punches.......V/Shotta.........drop an unbias vote on me vs. eveo its on my sig......Peayce
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