Voted For: Empire

hahaha, holy shit...very good battle both of you. Now lets break it down a little shall we...

Opener - Triple, a harder punch than emps
Closer - Emp, very creative + those links are fuckin funny
Punches - Triple, had some hard punches that made me laugh
Personals - Emp, hittin hard with the last 2 bars
Metas - Emp, had more + were layed out better
Multies - Emp, for actually havin some
Structure - Tie, both were fine
Vocab - Triple, more tech words
Wordplay - Triple, I feel triple had some very clever wordplay
Creativity - Emp, some of triples lines were played

Triple, you had some lines that were alright, but some I wasnt feeling. The Empire beeflines are just getting old, hes not even beefin with ppl anymore, plus everyone has taken a turn usin a beef line on him. You needed better personals and more effective metas. Also you used no multies which gave the verse less entertainment/complexity.

Empire, you needed to throw harder punches and use better vocab in this one. I know what your capable of and this one wasn't as hard as they usually are. However, it was good enough to beat this guy. Mostly because you had as very good researched closer, harder personals and metas, actually used multies, and had the overall more creative and original verse.

I just gotta say props to both, this was a close one, but I was just feelin Empires verse more than you Triple, he came out to win today. No beef, just my honest opinion of who won.
And if you do get upset about how I voted, too bad, cause I actually took the time to vote, and if nobody voted it would defeat the purpose of critiqing ppl on this site...

Please return the favour as I have just done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...249#post1599249

Peace.