Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Man, this one wasnt hard to decided a winner either. Street poet, you went over the 10 line maximum with 12 lines so I would automatically not vote for you...but putting that aside, I will still critique you both and see how you did minus the whole DQ thing...

Opener - Solja, poet's was a very weak punch
Closer - Solja, poet's didnt make any sense
Punches - Solja, for actually throwing punches that were understandable
Personals - Solja, first 5 lines were hard personal hits
Metas - Poet, had more than Solja
Multies - Neither had anything good
Structure - Solja, poets was WACK
Vocab - Poet, Solja's was quite basic
Wordplay - Poet, better wordplay than Solja's

Poet, see, even ho you should be DQ'ed, you still didnt win, That structure was just fucked right up, lines all over the place and caps left and right, clean it up a bit dawg, plus a few of your lines didn't rhyme which also came back to kick you in the ass...Falcons/shoutin, and the last 4-5 lines I couln't even find half of the rhymer words for them...too confusing to read, you gotta elevate boy...

The win here goes to Lyriclesolja without a doubt in my mind...