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The Jett
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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I don't like it.
The hook was Garbage.
Your flow is horrible. Too choppy.
Topic wise an lyrical wise good.
Now u just have to transform the text to audio.
Work on your flow and voice. Seem like ur tryin too hard. -1
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