Voted For: lyriclord

flow-lyriclord, reloaded the second lines on mostly the beginning 6 lines were stretched and didnt flow right compared to the first line

punches-lyriclord, some were a little weak but reloaded's was more weak in this case, reloaded jus gotta up ya vocab and get more creative with things, think about the lines and think how can u switch words around/add multies/ or add good vocab to spice up the punch and make it way better then how u originally wrote it

thanks basically it for this one reloaded good try no hate but lyriclord got this good luck

peace

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