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Old 09-21-04, 12:16 AM   #21
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Voted For: Triple_N

damn
empire
u had good punches but they didnt hit hard but some did,ur flow was good,ur structure was nice man,u had good vocab and personals iguess,ur opener was okay,but your closer was poo poo....i also liked the wordplay set into your verse dawg....

triple
your punches were good man they hit hard...although the first couple lines were wack..u raped this kid towards the end and the rest of your verse,ur flow was coo,and the structure was dope also,ur vocab and wordplay was nice in this too....nice personals towards the end,wack opener and a hard hitting coler that did damage

overall both had good wordplay,vocab,structure,flow,and okay personals in this,but with better and hard hitting punches im gonna say triple n takes this....empire not bad man props

v/triple n
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