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Guillotine verse:
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Don’t have the chance to ejaculate/
Son, like impotent dicks, you need to elevate/
Ryano aint posted an I’m ready to celebrate/
This a battle kid, why you tryin to collaborate/
I detonate an explode like the Oklahoma bomb/ (~peep his location)
A battle verse spittin first with perfection/
Another win for da collection /
I gotta ask, can you take rejection ??? /
No kid, I aint got no affection, only beef/
You got served, sunk like the great barrier reef/
“ryano”~cerous with a dick instead of a horn/
I’m only speakin my mind~ mind full of scorn/
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ok guillotine...you didn come with many punches but the ones you did came with were alright...opening bar was kinda forced..almost like you just needed a bar to go with the next one...good verse for a keystyle...
RYANO verse:
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next time u rhyme, spend some more time prewritting ur lines/
chop u up more then ur chopy ass rhymes/
cock back and make u blind, but not till after u see the red light shine from the nine/
yo raps is like a mexican tryin to cross the border, u barely gettin by/
guillotine, wut u mean, can take rejection/
...i changed yo girls dark skined complection to light when she sees the enormus size of my erection/
ur in the way of a run away locomotive/
me and yo girl is closet freaks, doin shit u neva heard of/
from now on u betta walk around wit yo guard up/
talkin about beef that u wusnt ready to start up
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ryano...kinda good multis if this were a keystyle im not sure if these verses were or wasn't but your punches were kinda off to me...i got em...but they just didn't make any since...openin bar was great but kinda faded in the end...
Overall:
imma have to go with guillotine on this one...his punches were more directed tawards ryano...ryano, understand this is text, talkin about his girl or whoever isnt gonna hurt him in words, you could probably pass in an audio like that...
Vote: Guillotine |