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Old 07-13-02, 12:57 AM   #21
Liquid Flame
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First Off , Unfuck . . . You Need To UNattatch Your Finger From The Hyphen (-) Key , All Of That Isn't Necessary , You Had Some Played Topics Like That "Off The Dome/Toupee" Line And That "Text CD" Line , But You Also Had Some Funny Shit Like That "Text Legend" Line , And That "2 N 1" Line Was Dope , (Would've Been Better Though If The Smiley Face Wasn't There) . . . lol , OK Verse I Suppose .

Lady Mahem . . . You Had Some Decent Flow Going On , But I Honestly Wasn't Feeling A Lot Of Your Lines , You Had A Good Openor But You Fell Off At The End , You Would've Had A Dope Ending Had It Been Worded Better , But No Doubt , Your Flow Was On Point Like A Fast Defender .


All In All , OK Battle I Suppose , But I Think The Guy With The Weird Name Wins . . . Barely . . . . .




VOTE ::: Unfuck....
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