Voted For: Clown

weak newb battle

punches- Clown all of yours were harder
personals- Clown yours were harder hittin
multis- neither of ya had em
metas- Clown cuz u just had better ones
word play- AITZ, cuz of one line
flow- Clown cuz u kept it goin smoothly

Clown u had better punches, and personals, but u need to elevate. try some wordplay 2.

AIDS i mean AITZ haha my bad. seriously though u need to elevate horribly, weak punches, weak personal, and flow wuz off. also work on wordplay.

Clown:
"wat the fucks a Aitz?no motha fucka a winna u aint/
i may be da clown but u da one bleedin da paint/" ok punch, re word it and its a decent punch.

AITZ:
"ill b sitten back watchen u clown around//
but next summer if im in ur town it will b wit a shotty,nine and a desert E// " one thing dude u gotta make it rhyme, and this verse wuz y u got word play, "clown around"

v/clown