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Old 09-21-04, 07:47 PM   #23
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Voted For: illuson

um ya

punches- luson cuz u had some
personals- luson cuz u had one
multis- neither of yall had em
metas- neither of yall had em
word play- neither of yall had em
flow- Twiz

Luson- weak verse, u need to elevate, punches, personals, basically everythin needs to be elevated

Twiz- aight verse, but u have to throw punches, this isnt a topical, youd be good in topicals.

Luson:
"see my ass ya can kiss it
every rhyme ya do ya bit it" weak punch, best i found

Twizted:
"I saw the shit on the news just the other day,
I ain't for singing no blues, I'ma make 'em pay," i liked it. but try topicals.

v/luson