whoa. Don't like the beat at all man. It's a mad hype sample (Jay used this) and the beat is slow - so it contradicts. Not really feeling the spoken word style either. Needs MAD more emotion. I see where you going with this track, and it's got potential, but not feeling much of anything off it right now. And turn ya vocals up a touch.

ps - reply to other threads - I got no problem closing threads - na'mean. be easy
-Phenom

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