Voted For: Paramik
aight you got this battle on lock....
paramix: aight you need to work a lil harder next itm ebecuz that was kinda wack.......lbut good battle thought you need to work a lil harder i no you came come better than this......but just actaully try next time..i no he was wack but still you need to try hard eveerytime.....
BLACK: you was all over the place with those strechted lines...just work on oyur structure and you will be 50 percent better...and also work on your neta4s and personals...everyone loves a good personal.......but next time aplly yourself more.....
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